67--DESNOS' Mourning for Mourning--available for reading, performing, producing, etc.

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Hi folks,

The file for this was overwritten by error and so it only exists as the
pdf file which I sent to the proofreader, with numbered lines which
will help you find the two errors, should you be interested in picking
any or all of these up.

They are quite lovely, so do give them a read.

Error in line 115:

"where" should be "which"

so that the line should read:

"beside bodies which were turning blue"

Error line line 327:

"that" should be "than"

so that the line should read:

"which usually makes us more dreamy than the tall lamp posts"

Sorry 'bout that.  Too many typing into the dead of night I suspect.

Thanks

love

raf